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s_sableo 04-26-2009 06:54 PM

poetry muqabla~!~
 
assalam-o-alikum frnds

ok frnds here what we have to do is k hum sey koi b member yahan per

koi picture insert karey jo k kisi kisam ki feelings show kar rahi hogi n baqi

members ko uskey hisaab sey koi shair likhna hoga apna usko dekh ker

uskey mahol k hisaab sey jis tarah sey b ap koi shair theek lagey apna banana

hai but ok n then we will choose k kis member ney sab sey aca shair likha hai ok

n aik picture for week rahegi after one week we can add new picture ok

so let's start am inserting first picture let see


WINNER OF FIRST IMAGE POETRY MUQABLA IS
1ST : S_SABLEO
2ND: K@IN@@T


NEXT IMAGE # 3

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K@IN@@T 04-26-2009 07:22 PM

woh kuch sonta to mai kehta k mujhay kuch kehna tha
woh pal bhar jo rok jata mujhay kuch aur kehna hai
galat fehmi nay batato ko barha diya warna kia kuch tha woh kuch samjha mujhay kuch aur kehna hai

K@IN@@T 04-26-2009 07:23 PM

nice thread

~wish munda~ 04-27-2009 12:32 AM

wow excelent broo v nice thread

~wish munda~ 04-27-2009 12:35 AM

phool ki khushboo chand ki roshni barish k ahsaas bun ker
wo merey paas aya tha ek khusshgawaar jhoonka bun ker
us k janay pay dil aisa rota hai baar baar
jisay shamma ki chahat main jelta hai hamehsa perwana baan ker
~wish~

s_sableo 04-27-2009 12:49 AM

thanku thanku princess and wish

v nice poetry vvv nice bohat khoob let c other users now and u can make more if u can

but not many more few like 3 or 4 times ok thanx again maib try karunga but abhi karta hu

agar ban gaya then likh dunga ni to then baad mei waise abhi moud hai thora kartey hain try dekho

s_sableo 04-27-2009 12:53 AM

kaisi mayoosi dey gaya wo shaks
hur taraf udaasi dey gaya wo shaks
maine mangi b zara see zindagi jeeney k liye
or zindagi zara see dey gaya wo shaks

lolzz hahaha kaisa arey yeh to acha ban gaya hai na thank thanku hahaahahaha

(¯`•¸♥Faryal♥¸•´¯) 04-27-2009 07:41 AM

nice thread leo

CHEEMO 04-27-2009 09:14 AM

nice

K@IN@@T 04-27-2009 07:04 PM

umeed ban k log zindagi mai aatay hai
khowab ban k ankho mai sama jatay hai
pehlay yaqeen dilatay hai woh hamaray hai
phir najanay kyu tanha chor jatay hai


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