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Share only two lines shayari HERE ! =)

If u post any type of ghazal in dis section, ur thred will be moved widout any notification..

 





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Okay Ma'am .. Huh !!

 





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acha je

 




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mhm =]

 





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tou phir is thread ko ashaar rules ke bajaye SHAIR RULES kardein.
Ashaar ka matlab hi ek sei ziada shair ke h ain : )

 




ایک تیرا ہجر جو بالوں میں سفیدی لایا
ایک تیرا عشق جو سینے میں جوان رہتا ہے


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Per is section mein to ashaar he post kiye jayenge na , lekin sirf two lines wale=]

 





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i think atleast 2 ashaar ho ek thread main 2 lines ke tab balance lagey ga like Ghalib ke 2 Ashaar ho kisi bhi Poet ka ya even apna but ashaar 2 share karein . its just my opinion rest up to you guyz

 







ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.


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i agree with ayaz
kam az kam ek aur ziada sei ziada 2 shair hona chaiye
jaisey

her koi dil ki hatheli pe hai sehra rakhey
kis ko sairab karei wo kis ko pyasa rakhey
hum ko acha nahi lagta koi humnaam tera
koi tujh sa ho tou phir naam bhi tujh sa rakhey


baaz auiqaat mukammal hi mafhoom do shairo sei hota hai...


waisey Anokhi jo new structure poetry ka section ka hai ger wo aap ne kia hai tou (Y) tou bohat khoob
waqai is ki zaroorat thi aur aisey mods ki bhi.
nice work.

 




ایک تیرا ہجر جو بالوں میں سفیدی لایا
ایک تیرا عشق جو سینے میں جوان رہتا ہے


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Hmm ji 4 lines b ho skti hain, or 2 lines ki shayari b Ashaar k section mein post ki jayegi! lekin ghazals wagaira ya wo shayariz jo 4 se ziyada hon Ashaar mein nhi post ki jayegi

and thanx for dose words of appreciation Shaam

 





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