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ye title hey meri kahani ka
mein ney isey likhna to shuroo ker diya hey
per ajj mein beech mein hi phuns giya hoon
agey kiya likhoon sumjh mein hi nahi araha
is kahani sey kalam hata loon ye mumkin nahi
or mukamal keroon .... to kesey keroon sumjh sey bahir hey
mein is kahani ka happy end chahta hoon .... per kesey keroon
mind stuck ho jata hey jab sochta hoon to ...

ye aik love story hey ... or is mein sirf do kirdaar hein
ik tashi hey or ik ladki hey anjani si ... jo janey kab mili
jaan pahchan bani fir dosti hoi or kab wo dosti piyar mein badal gayee
dono ko pata hi nahi chala ....
wese in dono mein kuch bhi ik sa nahi hey ...
ye dono bilkul bhi aik jesey nahi hein
na un key shoq miltey hein na mizaaj milta hey
ik ko itna ghussa ata hey key haad nahi or second
jesey ghussa koi cheez hoti hi nahi .... bilkul bhi ego nahi hey us mein
ik sumander ka deewana hey to second ko khushk sahra pasand hein ...
ik ko mashriq pasand hey or second ko maghrib ...
ik mustakbil ki batein kerta hey to second mazi sey bahir hi nahi ana chahta
ik umeedo per jee leta hey to second ko kuch umeed hi nahi ..
in last dono key aqeedey bhi same nahi hein ...
in dono mein ager ik cheez same hey to wo hey piyar
dono mein beinteha piyar hey ... jo nazer ata hey
apna ahsaas khud dilata hey wo piyar ....

is kahani mein sub kuch ho chuka hey ... fun bhi tragedy bhi
ladayee bhi doori bhi or door ho ker fir mil jaana bhi ...
abb mein is kahani ka happy end likhna chahta hoon
lakin in dono mein kuch ik jesa hey hi nahi
to mein in dono ka piyar kamiyab kesey likhoon
ager koi bhi aik apney aqeedey ki qurbani daita hey to
wo happy feel nahi kerey ga ...
nd mein is story ka end happy chahta hoon ....

so u all .... help me ... nd meri is adhoori story ko
complete kerney mein meri help kerein ...
app sub apni apni raey mein is story ka end likhein ...
jo bhi app ko lugey ... jo bhi app ki sumjh mein aey
abb ye hi rasta nazer ata hey mujhey apni story ko complete kerney ka ..

Thanks u all ... in advance ...
coz im sure u all meri help kerein gey ...


Disclaimer : ye ik farzi story hey or kisi sey compare nahi ... or na hi koi is ko kisi sey compare kerey ThanX

 

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[Charlie]

pyar mazhab aqeeday se pak hota hai pyar to bus pyar hota hai is main hadain nahin daikhi jateen ager aap ya wo apnay aqayed ko lay ker upset hain to sorry to say k aap ka pyar sacha nahin hai .... pyar na puchay zaat paat

 

[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

Originally Posted by Charlie

pyar mazhab aqeeday se pak hota hai pyar to bus pyar hota hai is main hadain nahin daikhi jateen ager aap ya wo apnay aqayed ko lay ker upset hain to sorry to say k aap ka pyar sacha nahin hai .... pyar na puchay zaat paat

ThanX Charlie for ur beautiful comment ... but brother its not me .. hahaha
its just a story brother ...
Thanks again ..

 

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[Charlie]

heheheh i din comment abt u bro i commented abt story u r writer so tellin ya points what u might use to solve da prob cheers bro

 

[DiE]

abey Tashi k bachey lolzzz itna dimagh na lagwaoo maira pehli baar pori story read ki mai nai funter ho tum lolzzz

mai end mai apney comments donga

 

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[ღƬαsнι☣Rασ™]

Originally Posted by DiE

abey Tashi k bachey lolzzz itna dimagh na lagwaoo maira pehli baar pori story read ki mai nai funter ho tum lolzzz

mai end mai apney comments donga

oh wow ... so its owner for me ...key app ney meri full story ko read kiya ... hahaha
ok thanks die bhai ... app key comments ka intezaar rahey ga ...

 

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[PRINCE SHAAN]

Mohabbat ki koi serhad nahi na koi rang hai na nasal hai mager mazhab zaroor hai dekhna yeh hai k kon kitna sacha piyar karta hai kon apne mazhab ki qurbani deta hai ager dono ek mazhab k maannay walay hain to hoslay se kaam lain aur waldain ko razi karain sachi mohabbat zaroor kaamyaab hogi.

 

[Princess N]

ager sath rihna chahte ho likin ye nai pata ki ye faisla sahi hai ya ghalat tu ( salat al istekhara ) parlay , agay kiya karna hai sab samajh ma aa jaiga

 

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[RoOZ SoOChTa HouN]

is kahani ka end hmmmmm soochna paraein ga ... yara abhi tu mai andhaa parathaa kha raha houn ... par jaald hee post karoun gha is kahani ka end ... khoosh rahoO

 

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[DreamoOo]

LOL Tashi

Compromise bee kisi cheez ka naam hey....
Hey aur waise bee love hoo ya arrange in one way or another , in one form or other , in one mean or other you hafta compromise on some stuff it could be any thing from food to wuteva.

 

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