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ShArArTi MuNdA 04-17-2009 07:27 AM

Silence, Emptiness, And Confusion
 
Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed

There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray

Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread

Confusion feeds like a savage inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different and disdained.

Jhuki Palkein 04-17-2009 01:07 PM

Great ..

ShArArTi MuNdA 04-18-2009 04:49 AM

Thanks JP

dur-e-shahwar 04-18-2009 05:27 AM

v nyc

Owais AisH 04-18-2009 09:17 AM

NICe one SHararti Keep it up

ShArArTi MuNdA 04-18-2009 08:20 PM

Thanks guys

ShahTaJ 04-18-2009 08:28 PM

very nice

ShArArTi MuNdA 04-18-2009 08:30 PM

Thanks Shahtaj jee

saadat 04-18-2009 08:46 PM

very nice and tender
great post
thanx
tc
sat

ShArArTi MuNdA 04-18-2009 09:25 PM

Thanks budddy


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