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Jhuki Palkein 08-04-2009 10:30 PM

Aik Koshish .
 
Dil Hay Kay Ab Wafa Jaanta Nahi , Mohabbat Ko Ab Pehchaanta Nahi .

Ye Zindagi , Zindagi Nahi , Maut Lagay , Bharosa Karnay Ko Ab Ye Dil Maanta Nahi .

Haal-e-Dil Bhi Kuch Theek Nahi , To Kya Hua Agar Usko Ab Humaari Parvaah Nahi Rahi .

Ye Insaa'n, Insaa'n Nahi , Jaanwar Lagein , Dil Ki Baat Batanay Ko Ab Ye Dil Manay Nahi.

Ab To Lagta Hay Tum Chalay Jao To Yehi Hoga Munasib, Hum Akelay The Akelay Hi Hain Sahi.

Ye Khushi Bhi Ab, Khushi Nahi , Ghum-e-Tanhayio'n Ka Samundar Lagat , Ke Dukh Aur Dard Kay Siwa Ab Is Dil Ko Kuch Raas Nahi .


K@IN@@T 08-05-2009 09:37 AM

Zabardast
v nice

!~*SOoLi 08-07-2009 06:30 PM

Ye Zindagi , Zindagi Nahi , Maut Lagay , Bharosa Karnay Ko Ab Ye Dil Maanta Nahi .
Ye Insaa'n, Insaa'n Nahi , Jaanwar Lagein , Dil Ki Baat Batanay Ko Ab Ye Dil Manay Nahi.


O Teri Khair Howay, Jaypee Itni Zalim Koshish .. Wah Wah Wah, Bohat AchawWw Laga Read Kar Kay .. :NoTaLlOw:
Magar Itni Zalim Feelings Lay Kar Kaha Say Aye Aap :(naqal:
& You Know, Poetry Par Aap Ka Haath Bhi Khul Raha Hay Ahista Ahista :p

Nida-H 08-09-2009 10:30 AM

very nice..keep it up JP !!! :hug:

MeOw* 08-09-2009 05:46 PM

bohot khoobb

SHAYAN 08-09-2009 10:11 PM

V.Nyc.. :)

§~|~µð€η~|~547 08-22-2009 09:05 PM

zaberdast

AYAZ 08-22-2009 10:59 PM

zaberdast (y) keep it up

Jhuki Palkein 08-29-2009 08:29 PM

Re: Aik Koshish .
 
Thank You Soo Much Everyone For Your Feed Back .

It Is Really Appereciated (:

Jhuki Palkein 08-29-2009 08:32 PM

Re: Aik Koshish .
 
Aur Shukriya Sooli Bhai , Aapka Pasand Karnay Ka ..

Erm , Kahaa'n Say Feelings Layi .. :noidea:


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