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dakoooooooo 12-24-2009 03:24 PM
sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
yaro bohat ha pyer un se kase tumhe bataw
kewna ma karo yaad un ko kase tume bataw
pyeri se ak pari hia wo jani ki jan ha wo
chahta hu bohat us ko ab kase use bataw

sab janti ha wo jan ki ha wo toti
kerta ho pyer bohat us se nahi baat ha ye khoti
dil ho gea ha us ka nahi pass ab wo mere
de do ga jan apni ban jaw us ki dil ka moti


kerta raho ga pyer us se ab ma sari umer
deta raho ga duhae us ko ab ma sari umer
nabi mili wo mujko ab nahi ha koi gum
ma to raho ga us ka hor wo meri sari umer

!~*AdOrAbLe*~! 12-24-2009 06:28 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
v v nicee

purple fairy 12-26-2009 10:37 AM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
humain bhi batain kon hai woh pari.
kissi din main nay pakar li na to issy pakar kay chuppa loon gi.


well done...
bohot achi poem hai.

bikhrai phool 12-27-2009 06:53 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
[hahahahah.... lo ji fairy ko bi btaae aur muje bi.... kon ha ji zara khul kr kahe na ji:date:IZE="2"][/size]

Nida-H 12-31-2009 08:50 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by dakoooooooo (Post 617212)
yaro bohat ha pyer un se kase tumhe bataw
kewna ma karo yaad un ko kase tume bataw
pyeri se ak pari hia wo jani ki jan ha wo
chahta hu bohat us ko ab kase use bataw

sab janti ha wo jan ki ha wo toti
kerta ho pyer bohat us se nahi baat ha ye khoti
dil ho gea ha us ka nahi pass ab wo mere
de do ga jan apni ban jaw us ki dil ka moti


kerta raho ga pyer us se ab ma sari umer
deta raho ga duhae us ko ab ma sari umer
nabi mili wo mujko ab nahi ha koi gum
ma to raho ga us ka hor wo meri sari umer
yeh serious shairi hai ya mazaiya??? :protest:

!~*AdOrAbLe*~! 12-31-2009 08:52 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
:bshy: woh tu mujhy bhi nahi pata chal saka wait for dakooo to cum he will tel us :blush-anim-cl:

dakoooooooo 01-01-2010 03:30 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
app dono ka thx ji
bass choti choti try kerte ha
ALLAH kare ga sahi ho jae ga

Princess N 01-03-2010 06:55 AM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
nice sharing janab

keep it up :)

Abewsha 08-14-2011 04:40 AM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
very nice...
keep sharing like dis.

life 08-16-2012 06:34 PM
Re: sari umer kerna ha pyer
 
very nice...


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