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ShArArTi MuNdA 01-16-2009 07:42 AM

Takda jedha rehnda si
 
Dears,,

I found it very interesting and jey twanu samjh aa jaye tey fer mainu v dasna twanu kiwain lagi eh... twadey reply'z da wait karan ga.thori jaye lambi hai per umeed kerda wan k tusi parh lo gei :p



Takda jedha rehnda si

oh meino takda rhenda si
guadian da munda
apne khiyalan ich gawacha
khawre ki labdha rehnda si
jithey vi mein jaawan
us toon luk nah pawan
tandoori te roti landian
ya chule agg balaindian
kapde dhondi howan
ya mein waal apne sukhandi howan
oh aas paas rehnda wang parchawan
akhan ich ohdey sawal si
banda oh vi kamal si
muhno oh kujh nah kehnda si
bas tik tik takda rehnda si .
vailey noon khab lag 9*
assan vi apni sochan ich pe 9*
kadi kadi uss da khiyal vi awanda si
keh iss munde noon ki hoya
gawachiya rehnda hey
te meinoo takda rehnda ey
pata te lage ki chahnda ey
sochan sochn ich kai varhey lang gae
assan apne aap tun vi sangan lag pae
kadi kadi mein vi sochdi saan
takda oh meino rahway
mein kiun eh chawndi aan
mere kol te iss da koi jawab nahein si
kadi kita apne naal vi hisab nahin si
ik din akhan merian mein varsaiya
dooje din meri doli jani si te
mein pehli war usnoo kol bulaya
us noon keha kal mein chali jawangi
bit bit takdian us di akhon do hanjo digge
mein poojhdiya hoiya kehiya tu kiun randa ein
mein kujh dnna baad fir awangi.
tak ke meino oh hassiya
kadi tussi takiya hoey
akhon jehda roe
mehon hassiya hoey
ohdey hanjo te oh hassa
meri samjh ich nahein si aaya.
mein khud rondi saan
ki deindi us noon dilasa
doli chaddhiya mein unhon si labhiya
meino te @$$ paas oh nahein si disiya
ajje vi mein sochdi aan
jande vari uss kamle ne
mar jaane jeun joge nein
meino kiun nahein si takiya
varhey lang 9* ajje vi dil ich mein rakhiya
meino jandi vari kiu nahein si uss ne takiya.

jehdha har vele takda meino rehnda si

~*Gillanii 01-17-2009 12:57 AM

guadian da munda Ya Dodiyaa'n Da Munda? HaHa :(l0l): Bohat Khoob Yaar, Bohat Hi achay ...
BaSs Jaan Waylay Takna Chaida Si, AyhoO E KhaCh Mari Munday NaY ... :lol:

ShArArTi MuNdA 01-17-2009 08:22 AM

shukriya soooli paaa jeee twadi rai da v bara shukriya :p twanu changi lagi sadey laye eh hi kafi ha ;) pawey ohh munda koi v hoyeee naley ohh munda kidrey sada dushman hi na hoya hovey :p

Nida-H 01-17-2009 12:26 PM

very nice..

ShArArTi MuNdA 01-17-2009 08:07 PM

Thanks ruby jeee

AKHROT 07-11-2009 10:22 PM

good sharing

FAJAAN 07-14-2009 07:55 PM

nyce shraing

Hamzaking 10-18-2009 09:47 PM

Re: Takda jedha rehnda si
 
Nice:)

Ghuncha 05-19-2010 07:55 PM

Re: Takda jedha rehnda si
 
Nice ........

~~KING~~ 08-04-2010 09:23 AM

Re: Takda jedha rehnda si
 
very nice.....................:bu:...............thanx for sharing..................:hi:


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