[M A H i]

Rejection or not,
This is not because I found you so undivine
But my heart is not here
I have been through so much I fear,
And lost someone so dear.
I am still lost and wary,
A doll of no emotions
Breakable as glass,
How I wish I could share your feelings,
The temptation is just not there,
Or the thought of wanting doesn’t seem real anymore,
I wish I could care,
I am near the edge of sanity,
Placed myself in a vulnerable state,
Conflicting desires.
There never will be a farewell,
Because it will never end.

 

[Shaam]

a doll never gets break
be in one hand
with love and care.

Nice one Mahi

 

[~wish munda~]

hmm nice ..

 

[Shaam]

lemem eexplain ma words too

actually we always care of what we get after loosing it
so be concious wheneve we get a love
this is specially for girls
they usually get many who says they love her
but there must be a guage for truth.

 

[M A H i]

No need of over explination

 

[Shaam]

Mahi...
emm not over explaning it
its just elaboration of what i tried to say.
may be my words inst perfect to explain what i meant.
anyway

again it is a nice poem showing true emotions.

Take care

 

[saadat]

nice lines...

well done

sat

 

[M A H i]

Thanks.

 

[CaReLeSs]

Zabardast...

 

[Owi]

Very Nice