[m.asghar mirpuri]

Wo samjhta hai keh mere baaray sab janta hai
Mujeh uss seh kitna pyar hai yeh kab jaanta hai
Aahgaz mein mere pyar ko jo dil lagi samjta raha
Meri mohabat sachi hai yeh baat ab janta hai
Doston neh tou youn he badnaam kar rakha hai
Aadmi bura nahein hoon yeh mera rab janta hai
Uss ki har baat ki Asghar aisi tasdeeq karta hai
Uss keh kehne seh din ko shab janta hai
Tujh peh khaas karam hai apne Mola ka Asghar
Teri shayari ki badaulat tujeh jag janta hai

 

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Last edited by m.asghar mirpuri; 09-01-2011 at 02:00 AM..

[AYAZ]

good but first line mein

Wo samjhta hai keh mere baaray MAIN sab janta hai

Hota tou ziyada sahi rehta but still its good

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[life]

buhat khoob..

 

[SHAYAN]

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