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Originally Posted by Alia

V good 1st Attempt ....
Keep it Up

aap ne frame ko Stretch Kar dia hai .......
Fonts Starting mein Noor nstk use kariye ... jab Grip aajaye Blending mein Phir Fonts style chnge kar sakte hai ...

Aw8in 4 ur next Sharing !!

ok... thanx 4 Advice

 

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[AYAZ]

Buhaat khoob bro keep it up , achi try hai aur bhi achi hosakti hei keep practicing.

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[Credible KiRan]

zabardasttttt

 

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[Flower~]

nice work

 

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~“She said, Never forget me
as if the coast
could forget the ocean
or the lung
could forget the breath
or the earth
could forget the sun,”~

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Originally Posted by AYAZ

Buhaat khoob bro keep it up , achi try hai aur bhi achi hosakti hei keep practicing.

thanx.. me koshish kr raha hoon mazeed behtr krny ki

 

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Originally Posted by K.S

zabardasttttt

thanx jee

 

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Originally Posted by Flower~

nice work

thanx...

 

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[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

hahah so nice design......

 

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[)*¤° ąℓɨƶą ąhʍ€ď °¤*(]

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[Razii]

wow great effort bro

hmmmmmmmmm following are just to improve ur future efforts

..... border uniform ho to zayada khoobsurat lagta hai
..... color combination main contrast ho to i think design khila khila sa lagay ga
..... and shair ka font zayada improve kiya ja sakta hai. .

Best of luck

 

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