[Alia]

Originally Posted by Rumisha

alia ab chack karo saru hai k phir be galat hai

correct ....

 

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[Alia]

Originally Posted by Zafina

yeh lo

Correct .
Next hw write a gazal in inpage wid poet name n Submit .

 

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[Alia]

Originally Posted by AYAZ

Correct .
Next hw write a gazal in inpage wid poet name n Submit .

 

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[AYAZ]

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[Abewsha]

 

[Abewsha]

Originally Posted by AYAZ

Ayaz ab dekhna alia kahe gi ayaz ap ki ghazal
k words k bech bohat zada space hai aur dubara
try karo lol mere sath b yea hi ho raha hai

 

[Rumisha]

oh Thanks God k sahi hai ab wrna maine phir se be likha tha

 

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[AYAZ]

hmm yeh space mai nei nahi daley , align karney per aien hai .

 

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ALLAH FARMATA HAI :
AEY BANDEY JO HUA
WO ACHA HUA .
JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI.
JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA.
TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI
TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA.
JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA
JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA
JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA
AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA.
TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI
BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI
YANI NAIK AMAAL.

[Alia]

Originally Posted by Rumisha

oh Thanks God k sahi hai ab wrna maine phir se be likha tha

Submit 1 more nazam wid poet name

 

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[Alia]

Originally Posted by AYAZ

Aap Box ko adjust kareinge Tau sahi ho jayega .
Do it again n Post .

 

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