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04-29-2011, 01:58 PM
i think atleast 2 ashaar ho ek thread main 2 lines ke tab balance lagey ga like Ghalib ke 2 Ashaar ho kisi bhi Poet ka ya even apna but ashaar 2 share karein . its just my opinion rest up to you guyz
ALLAH FARMATA HAI : AEY BANDEY JO HUA WO ACHA HUA . JO HORAHA HAI ACHA HO RAHA HAI. JO HOGA WO BHI ACHA HOGA. TERA KIYA GAIYA JO TU ROTA HAI TU KIA LAYA JO TU NE KHO DIYA. JO LIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) SEI LIYA JO DIYA YAHIN (DUNYA) PE DIYA JO AAJ TERA HAI PEHLAY KISI AUR KA THA AUR KAL KISI AUR KA HOGA. TABDEELI KAINAAT KA MAMOOL HAI BAS TU WO JAMA KAR JO TU SATH LEI KAR JANEY WALA HAI YANI NAIK AMAAL. |
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04-29-2011, 09:33 PM
i agree with ayaz kam az kam ek aur ziada sei ziada 2 shair hona chaiye jaisey her koi dil ki hatheli pe hai sehra rakhey kis ko sairab karei wo kis ko pyasa rakhey hum ko acha nahi lagta koi humnaam tera koi tujh sa ho tou phir naam bhi tujh sa rakhey baaz auiqaat mukammal hi mafhoom do shairo sei hota hai... waisey Anokhi jo new structure poetry ka section ka hai ger wo aap ne kia hai tou (Y) tou bohat khoob waqai is ki zaroorat thi aur aisey mods ki bhi. nice work.
ایک تیرا ہجر جو بالوں میں سفیدی لایا ایک تیرا عشق جو سینے میں جوان رہتا ہے And Allah is All Enough For Me (Al-Quran)
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