[Rumisha]

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Last edited by Rumisha; 02-17-2010 at 11:37 PM..

[!!!sweety!!!]

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

 

[Rumisha]

Originally Posted by !!!sweety!!!

very nice
first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..

 

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Originally Posted by Mahnoor malik

Siso aap nh theek tara se para nhi galtiya or be the..well i correct it again..thankz for tha remaning..

hehe mene jo likha woh apne nhi para mene kaha tha ke first line mein hamari thik likha he baqi 3 mien worng he

uske bad mene kaha

imla ki ghaltiyan he check kar lien

matlab baqi poetry mien bhi ghaltiyan hein likhne mien inpage mein ghaltiyan ki apne

 

[Rumisha]

sis phele line main be galti the..jo aap nh pari nahi suno word be galt ta( jis main seen-noon-wow) ata hai main nh (seen-wow-noon-wow) likka ta--well poetry theek hai ab--ab aap ko koi shekayat to nhi ho ge i hope so--sis
galti to first time hr koi krta hai--aap se be howi ho gee--galtiyoo se insan seekh ta hai--any way--thankz for da comment--

 

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[!!!sweety!!!]

Originally Posted by Mahnoor malik

sis phele line main be galti the..jo aap nh pari nahi suno word be galt ta( jis main seen-noon-wow) ata hai main nh (seen-wow-noon-wow) likka ta--well poetry theek hai ab--ab aap ko koi shekayat to nhi ho ge i hope so--sis
galti to first time hr koi krta hai--aap se be howi ho gee--galtiyoo se insan seekh ta hai--any way--thankz for da comment--

ary mind kar gayi? so sorry yar mein bas bata rahi thi ke gahlti kiya he take aap best ban sako mera aur koi irada nhi tha mujhey jitna pata tah mene batya soryy again if mene hurt kiya he apko to

bilcul sabse ghalti hoti he mujh se bhi hui thien aik bar nhi kai bar hui thi aisi koi bat nhi
lekin mera irada ghalat nhi tha bas yehi tha ke ap ghalti thik kar leti

 

[!«╬Ĵamil Malik╬«!]

Very Nice MALIK

 

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beautifull work

 

[Zafina]

Zabardast....Oye thats means k ab may bhi maidan may uthar hi awo...soon u will see my designed poetries ..Keep it up sis

 

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[shani]

nice work mahnoor keep it up friend

 

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